cool idea. the audio was a little distracting. very silent in between voice overs. Maybe put some natural ambience in, or bring down the volume of the VO's. Good job though.
Long tag line but I liked it!!! Nice continuation of the original Stride gum commercials where they seek you out and make you stop chewing. As you had mentioned, the video did look at bit washed out.
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good concept that played off the original...was washed out like out like you mentioned, but the cuts and shots were strong
Nice, clean DVD menu. Good, different approach to product. It kept my attention.
Interesting idea trying to parody the original commercial.
good concept. story is smooth. nice sound effect. should do some video work.
cool idea. the audio was a little distracting. very silent in between voice overs. Maybe put some natural ambience in, or bring down the volume of the VO's. Good job though.
Great concept. I think it could use more ambient noises of a neighborhood (just my opinion).
Good humor. The car sound makes it sound like a toy car. This could easily fit into the commercial series
Long tag line but I liked it!!! Nice continuation of the original Stride gum commercials where they seek you out and make you stop chewing. As you had mentioned, the video did look at bit washed out.
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