very cute! i liked the way it was composed, the camera angles varied nicely, but were still simple. The text that came up at the end of the commercial was nice, it was elegant and simple.
The audio seemed a little quiet. It could've been because of the speakers. The font at the end was a little hard to read. Other than that I really enjoyed your shots and composition.
Nicely done. It was a nice integration of classy sort of appeal. Also, the shot were real nice and the text was consistent with the theme of the commercial. Nice choice of tag line as well. The voice over was well done, although it could have been louder so it projected more during the commercial. Other than that it was a well done project with a nice use of a constant theme.
As a commercial, it's very well-presented. I was impressed by your shot compositions. My only critique would be that the voice track could have been louder. A nit-pick, I know =D
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Good lighting, nice camera movements and transitions. Good Dialog
Nice location. It is a nice combination of voice over to create that English home.
very cute! i liked the way it was composed, the camera angles varied nicely, but were still simple. The text that came up at the end of the commercial was nice, it was elegant and simple.
The audio seemed a little quiet. It could've been because of the speakers. The font at the end was a little hard to read. Other than that I really enjoyed your shots and composition.
Nicely done. It was a nice integration of classy sort of appeal. Also, the shot were real nice and the text was consistent with the theme of the commercial. Nice choice of tag line as well. The voice over was well done, although it could have been louder so it projected more during the commercial. Other than that it was a well done project with a nice use of a constant theme.
Good video shot and moving. But the audio is kind of weak for the commercial. 7.5 for total.
As a commercial, it's very well-presented. I was impressed by your shot compositions. My only critique would be that the voice track could have been louder. A nit-pick, I know =D
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