With the circumstances of what happened with trying to do your video, I think you came up with a great product. Very effective and interesting. The ending seemed a little long and drawn out, I would've made it a little shorter.
Strong voiceover and the script is pretty good…must have been challenging to completely reset and start over…strong beginning…ending with song was perhaps too long…some of the sfx did not sync correctly.
It was an interesting concept . Its unfortunate that it didn't turn out exactly as planned but the video is still very well composted. I liked the camera shot of the flag at the beginning and like the use of imagery throughout the video. There are some pretty unique camera shots throughout the video that are pretty need too.
I dont know what to really say as far as any bad points.
Pretty cool documentary. It seemed like some of the shots could have used a tripod, they seemed a bit shaky. Also, some of the pans were a bit fast and kind of blurry. I liked the approach to it, though. The humor mixed with the real emotion was cool. During the list of things you learned I thought it would have been cool to show videos backing the "fun facts", if you had them that is. Other than that I thought it was fun and interesting. Opening title sequence was well done and interesting.
1)the way you turned the documentary around was good. its hard to get good interviews 2)music choices were very appropriate 3)audio/narration is very good
1)the song at the end with the montage lasted too long 2)lighting was very different from scene to scene 3)there were a lot of reflections, though that is hard to avoid
10 comments:
STRENGTHS:
-Funny
-Honest
-Sound effects
WEAKNESSES:
-Poor title font?
-Shaky cam
-Country music ;)
With the circumstances of what happened with trying to do your video, I think you came up with a great product. Very effective and interesting. The ending seemed a little long and drawn out, I would've made it a little shorter.
Strong voiceover and the script is pretty good…must have been challenging to completely reset and start over…strong beginning…ending with song was perhaps too long…some of the sfx did not sync correctly.
good sound production and titles. The editing was also well paced.
It was an interesting concept . Its unfortunate that it didn't turn out exactly as planned but the video is still very well composted. I liked the camera shot of the flag at the beginning and like the use of imagery throughout the video. There are some pretty unique camera shots throughout the video that are pretty need too.
I dont know what to really say as far as any bad points.
Good images, good sound, interesting subject, and well done even without interviews.
Pretty cool documentary. It seemed like some of the shots could have used a tripod, they seemed a bit shaky. Also, some of the pans were a bit fast and kind of blurry. I liked the approach to it, though. The humor mixed with the real emotion was cool. During the list of things you learned I thought it would have been cool to show videos backing the "fun facts", if you had them that is. Other than that I thought it was fun and interesting. Opening title sequence was well done and interesting.
Nice song/title connection.
Good B-roll sources.
Good light feeling with narration in the beginning.
Good doc. I liked the way you did did the beginning with the graphics and sfx. Very clever and funny!!!
The ending was a bit long with the Toby Keith song, but all is forgiven cause I don't mind that song.
Good Job!!!
1)the way you turned the documentary around was good. its hard to get good interviews
2)music choices were very appropriate
3)audio/narration is very good
1)the song at the end with the montage lasted too long
2)lighting was very different from scene to scene
3)there were a lot of reflections, though that is hard to avoid
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