Interesting idea. A nice small ad for water instead of energy drinks. I think it would have been a good idea to incorporate some dialogue in there to add to the story more. Great shot near the end with the choosing the water over the energy drink out of the fridge. Framing worked really well for that shot and focused well.
The film work was really good. I particularly liked the shots running on the sidewalk with the traffic of Michigan Street in the background. I liked it a lot. The choice of music was very fitting and I liked the appearance of the reaper. The story was pretty cool... And the fridge shot was neat.
Pro's-- good music flow, concept put together well, liked the grim reaper touch
Cons-- maybe would've used a dreamy, feathered look around the dream sequence; bedroom scenes were a little too dark; should have seen label for energy drink in refrigerator to let audience know exactly what it was
8 comments:
Nice Music. Good Effect for dream scene. Short simple but good story telling and camera moving.
Good concept
Good editing
Good camera angles
Cons:
Story was confusing at first
Video Quality
Interesting idea. A nice small ad for water instead of energy drinks. I think it would have been a good idea to incorporate some dialogue in there to add to the story more. Great shot near the end with the choosing the water over the energy drink out of the fridge. Framing worked really well for that shot and focused well.
good idea, liked the beginning
it was almost like a water commercial.
maybe some dialogue would have been good.
camera movement when it was following bed was shaky.
you could have had her talking to people how she doesnt feel well.
The film work was really good. I particularly liked the shots running on the sidewalk with the traffic of Michigan Street in the background. I liked it a lot. The choice of music was very fitting and I liked the appearance of the reaper. The story was pretty cool... And the fridge shot was neat.
Pro's-- good music flow, concept put together well, liked the grim reaper touch
Cons-- maybe would've used a dreamy, feathered look around the dream sequence; bedroom scenes were a little too dark; should have seen label for energy drink in refrigerator to let audience know exactly what it was
Some of the pans were real jumpy and i didn't exactly understand the grim reaper thing.
Unique concept. Very original execution Good camera angles. You could turn that into a water commercial with some tighter cuts.
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