Awesome script. A lot of the dialogue was appropriately weird and comical. I liked a lot of the treatments you did to the picture. However, sometimes it went a little over the top and was kinda hard to adjust to. Hit the right idea with the intentions you had of re-imagining Sin City. Very well done.
-special effects were fantastic -voiceover audio was very clear -story was hilarious -i liked how the colors of the main character's clothes changed, based on his mood
Very good execution. The camera angles and script really had the "Sin City" vibe going on. I really enjoyed the visuals you created in After Effects. Locations were also terrific. Can't really find any negative to say. Good job!
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Really good story line
Really nice coloring
Good Audio
It is pretty awesome
Great idea
great visual effects
very good editing
Hilarious!!!
the only bad I could think of is to make it just a little more interesting.
Good color effects & narration. Also very good choice of locations.
I like the camera angles and the use of color manipulation. The edits were appropriate.
The narrator manages to not be boring, so kudos!
Good use of comedy.
Good idea and color correction. Nice story telling and narrating. Good effect. Nice ending and twisted story.
Pro's-- nice coloring, nice use of different camera angles, different concept, good continuity
Cons-- maybe would've liked to have seen some more different angles of the girl in purple, one seen of guy in shadow was hard to see
I liked it…heard about this in the scriptwriting class…the script is great and the color effects are awesome…
Great use of contrast and bringing out the colors in the shirts. I also thought the effects on the canals was good.
-Informative presentation.
Awesome script. A lot of the dialogue was appropriately weird and comical. I liked a lot of the treatments you did to the picture. However, sometimes it went a little over the top and was kinda hard to adjust to. Hit the right idea with the intentions you had of re-imagining Sin City. Very well done.
great concept
love the color effects
funny ending
cool silhouettes
color from shirt in the middle bled into the face
some pops in the audio
-special effects were fantastic
-voiceover audio was very clear
-story was hilarious
-i liked how the colors of the main character's clothes changed, based on his mood
True to the feel of Sin City. Great masking of colors.
I thought the outlines were good as a memory that he can't remember, but it was over used. It could have more details.
Good used of the "Green" as a call back to the movie.
Very good execution. The camera angles and script really had the "Sin City" vibe going on. I really enjoyed the visuals you created in After Effects. Locations were also terrific. Can't really find any negative to say. Good job!
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