-you could see the Zoom sitting next to the interviewee -talent did a good job -what was up with the birds chirping? was that accidental? perhaps you could have redone the audio with a voiceover instead of the original audio -the "meditation scene" lasted too long, it was funny at first, but took up way too much time -story was definitely amusing
you can see the zoom in the shot 1 minute of silence? if you wanted to pull t hat off, maybe some more camera angles. should have had some sort of music
Haha very funny idea. I thought it worked well. I enjoyed it. It really gave the opportunity for creative shots. I like the 1 minute of silence, it was a great idea and you either had to commit to it or let it go, but you committed and it was great. Well done, script and all was fun. Great sound effects.
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-you could see the Zoom sitting next to the interviewee
-talent did a good job
-what was up with the birds chirping? was that accidental? perhaps you could have redone the audio with a voiceover instead of the original audio
-the "meditation scene" lasted too long, it was funny at first, but took up way too much time
-story was definitely amusing
Pro's-- different concept, had funny moments, mustache was a nice touch
Cons-- black and white color didn't seem to fit story, story was kind of vague, minute of silence seemed to last a little too long
interesting idea,
funny
you can see the zoom in the shot
1 minute of silence? if you wanted to pull t hat off, maybe some more camera angles.
should have had some sort of music
Interesting. But more a like a interview documentary. The black and white scene looks like a movie but why?
Haha very funny idea. I thought it worked well. I enjoyed it. It really gave the opportunity for creative shots. I like the 1 minute of silence, it was a great idea and you either had to commit to it or let it go, but you committed and it was great. Well done, script and all was fun. Great sound effects.
pretty damn funny
Nice concept. Might need some editing to take out pauses.
Good humor. The 1 minute of silence doesn't work. Needs more shot variety.
Very clever idea. Nice improv responses from you as the lion-tamer. Also, genius move in the 1 minute of silence!!! LOL
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