Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Alrick and Dawei News package

http://www.alrickwilliams.com/

14 comments:

Travis said...

sound was a little inconsistant, camera angles and shots were great. Video was entertaining.

Stephen Elkin said...

Nice camera shouts, pretty smooth camera transitions, it definitely looked like a real news story.

Mark B Costello said...

Very interesting subject matter... lots good b roll... overall very well done. Also good dvd menu.

David Marshall said...

The audio from the speaker was a bit muffled. Good interview with the policeman. B-roll went nicely with the VO. The stand-in was a bit rough audio-wise. Ending was kind of abrupt.

Stephen Elkin said...

haha, shots not shouts my bad

jmyeager said...

Good story.
great b-roll, and interviews.
audio levels could be even.
Great job

Gareth said...

Excellent B roll and interviews. the story brought to light something people don't always give a lot of thought to. some of the audio was a bit jarring at times (loud background hiss)

Anonymous said...

There's some shaky-cam and framing issues, but I like it. Go mayor and police!

Anonymous said...

I think it was excellent…no real complaints…could have used an official ending, but I’m sure you had too much footage. Audio was the only complaint…even with the audio you had…could have used a paragraphic eq to cut the hum noise…and should have has fade in and out between audio clips so you wouldn’t have those pops.

Evan Roberts said...

Very good stand up by Alrick, very professional. Some of the audio was a little muffled but overall pretty good.

Maybe try use 3 point lighting on interviewees.

Anonymous said...

Strengths-- nice DVD menu, great B roll, good informative story

Weaknesses-- audio level didn't seem to match VO at times, audio was off from mouth movement. You don't have to introduce someone speaking by saying "He said..." and then playing the person speaking. Just play the person's footage and place the caption at the bottom of the screen. It gives it a more professional flow.

Good job!

Sean Donelson said...

Great B-roll!! The shot of the officer searching the suspect looked like something you would see on TV. The stand-in had some audio issues with the wind, but overall great news segment.

aW said...

I still thought it was ok

Greg S. said...

Good montage of event and restaurants.
I didn't notice that it wasn't tripod shots.

Nicely done.