Thursday, March 26, 2009

Gareth and Evan Documentary Blog

http://p350.livejournal.com/1077.html

9 comments:

Travis said...

Strengths:
good concept
good audio
good shot

Weaknesses:
editing
buzz in audio

Mark B Costello said...

Interesting subject matter, good music... like the profile shot, smooth camera movement, and editing. Good job with the interview. I like the head shots. Excellent job overall, and great ending.

Anonymous said...

Very very interesting subject…who would have thought…very clean edit…audio doesn’t seem to be all at the same level…confusing background for interview…beginning the computers are on, then at the end computers are off…music and intro were also very strong

Anonymous said...

Pro's-- Different topic, good info, nice end credits.

Cons-- CU on Baker a little too close and too long, maybe needed to state at beginning what MRIPA stands for for better understanding going into video, would have been nice to see some more B-roll when explaining use of items, ending felt like it was hanging.

David Marshall said...

The extreme close-up was a bit much. Real good shots and framing, B Roll worked nicely with VO. He was a good speaker and real informative. Very interesting topic, the information was presented well and the provided imaging and video were pretty good. The ending was good, it left the viewer intrigued and sort on the edge of their seat.

Ash Parr said...

1)intriguing topic
2)lighting in the opening intro was awesome
3)great camera shots

1)extreme close-up shot in the beginning lasted a little too long
2)lighting on the interview about the crump was a little too shadowy
3)music at the end was a little loud

jmyeager said...

cool intro
good shots
organization and story is great

could have used some eerie music during parts of video.

Sean Donelson said...

Great ending!!! Very creepy! I liked it. Overall, good job.

Greg S. said...

Good angle facing left, but stayed on it too long.

Good assets from them. Who hires them? How did you connect with them?