Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Project 3: Travis Collins blog Link

http://traviscollinsblog.blogspot.com/2009/03/project-3-news-story.html

12 comments:

Evan Roberts said...

The audio could have been better and consistent.

The shots were well composed.

Mark B Costello said...

Good subject. Nice opening shot... good use of voice over & nice B roll and editing, interesting interview subject. Audio levels could be more consistent.

Greg S. said...

I was unaware of this story. Thanks for bringing this.

Need to remove background noise.

Anonymous said...

Strengths-- different topic, very nice DVD menu, nice captions

Weaknesses-- audio levels were not consistent, ending didn't feel complete, wouldn't have used fade out

Gareth said...

Choppy audio, but interesting content and subject. lead out could have been a bit stronger. otherwise quite informative.

David Marshall said...

The one interviewee was moving around a lot and it was a bit distracting. Video was shot well and the topic was interesting. I liked the comparisons to other cities. Some of the audio was rough but you were recording right on scene and it's hard to capture there.

David Yan said...

Good story, I know it is hard to pick the clear sound out side.

jmyeager said...

good story.
good b-roll
editing at beginning could have been a little cleaner.
A lot of wind, which I know can't be helped.
Good job.

aW said...

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Anonymous said...

Interesting topic that I knew nothing about…your interview was funny, and I thought composed well.

aW said...

good b-roll

Sean Donelson said...

I really liked the DVD template. Audio was a bit rough in the stand-ins and interviews outside. I feel you with the mic issues though. I had a hell of a time getting equipment that actually worked.!!!

Good job though!